These are my PP poster comments. . .
I don't know if can pass or not... :(
Sufficient information for your purpose, but lacking in detailed analysis. Analysis was inaccurate at some points eg. the fact that customers who visited Koufu after viewing the advert does not mean that the Koufu brand was recognised. Insufficient analysis of survey results. Examples could also be enhanced with more elaboration and detail. Useful reflection on learning points.
Insufficient information gathered. Information was very general. Limited findings, methods were not clear. Report was very weak with only surface information, inability to adequately analyse his findings, support his claims nor defend his stand.
Written report is weak and disorganised. Need to work on better defence: Need more research to back up the claims Work on maintaining eye contact and proper use of vocal variety (especially volume)